MWWT: Spaceman #1 pg05
barking_frog on Sept. 23, 2007
TheMidge28: To tell you the truth, I've gotten such opposite comments on my dialog that I don't know if it's working or not. Of the people who have an opinion on it, 50% love it and 50% seem to think it's hideous. I'm left confused in the middle!
Peipei: Thanks for reading!
DAJB: Glad you're enjoying the story.
cameron11691: Thanks!
TheMidge28 at 11:42AM, Sept. 29, 2007
well I could tell if you were faking it or not...well done on the diallogue...I responded to the comment on the previous page...
barking_frog at 4:09AM, Sept. 29, 2007
"I like the dialogue it appears you stunted it for the characters..." Yup, Dennis and Ethel get my best attempt at reproducing poor/uneducated southern U.S. speech patterns. Since I hail from the Great Lakes region, and am currently living in California, I'm admittedly faking it with all I've got. ^.^
TheMidge28 at 1:25PM, Sept. 28, 2007
I like the dialogue it appears you stunted it for the characters...
DAJB at 11:16PM, Sept. 23, 2007
Ten hours old pizza ... mmm! (As Homer would undoubtedly say!) Nice page composition. Again!
cameron11691 at 10:45PM, Sept. 23, 2007
awesome page