Chapter03 PG21

Zimeta on Dec. 4, 2011

Almost done with this chapter!
I changed Will's reply to
Tiffany's last sentence on this page soooo many times. It kept sounding
too political and icky. The best way to fix it ended up being having him
say something from a very emotional standpoint.
It would be so
easy to fall into the politics trap with this story, but don't worry;
this is character-driven, not agenda-driven.