Wow, talk about the pot calling the kettle black...
-You should most definitely follow the previous advice about backgrounds. Just seriously, trust me on that.
-If you're going to edit a sprite, more power to you. Hell, if you're clever enough to realize that Megagloves don't make good human hands, fantastic. But your author sprite needs a little editting. Just throwing on the Dr. Light hands and feet isn't gonna cut it. Try to make them blend in a little better.
-You removed Bass's nose when you editted the last sprite in the 4th panel. Don't make it harder on yourself; just use the closed-mouth sprite.
... Ok, actually, I really don't have anything else that I can add. This is pretty decent for a newbie comic. I'll probably have more advice to give you 30 comics down the road or so.
Nintendude at 8:37PM, Jan. 4, 2007
good job..
Vagabond at 7:07PM, July 20, 2006
Wow, talk about the pot calling the kettle black... -You should most definitely follow the previous advice about backgrounds. Just seriously, trust me on that. -If you're going to edit a sprite, more power to you. Hell, if you're clever enough to realize that Megagloves don't make good human hands, fantastic. But your author sprite needs a little editting. Just throwing on the Dr. Light hands and feet isn't gonna cut it. Try to make them blend in a little better. -You removed Bass's nose when you editted the last sprite in the 4th panel. Don't make it harder on yourself; just use the closed-mouth sprite. ... Ok, actually, I really don't have anything else that I can add. This is pretty decent for a newbie comic. I'll probably have more advice to give you 30 comics down the road or so.
Collossus at 6:29PM, July 20, 2006
Dude seriously nobody gives a damn about your stupid author your focusing your comic waaaaaay to much on your stupid premade author!