I'll apologize in advance for being harsh but here we go.
Some of the text boxes are too big for the amount of words they have, and they are pixel-y, especially the first one. Some spelling mistakes as well. The panels also don't line up properly. The title is surrounded by small white areas and is cut off at parts. To top it all off, it is kinda hard to figure out what is going on.
Hope I didn't crush you're comic making spirit. Good luck with the next one.
Zippo Prower at 2:47PM, Oct. 19, 2007
Pixelated text boxes= :(
Rentorian at 7:49PM, Oct. 17, 2007
I'll apologize in advance for being harsh but here we go. Some of the text boxes are too big for the amount of words they have, and they are pixel-y, especially the first one. Some spelling mistakes as well. The panels also don't line up properly. The title is surrounded by small white areas and is cut off at parts. To top it all off, it is kinda hard to figure out what is going on. Hope I didn't crush you're comic making spirit. Good luck with the next one.
dvcrumble at 5:58PM, Oct. 17, 2007
Can you at least tell me what I'm doing wrong? It's only been 3 issues you know. I'm not making these anymore, cause of school.
MINIMATTY at 8:29AM, Oct. 1, 2007
Yep plain old short and boring.
dvcrumble at 3:25PM, Sept. 16, 2007
I worried about that. Go here to read about what GTOF is and about the characters from it. http://www.tonycomix.com/forum/
YoshyRyuDCC at 3:05PM, Sept. 16, 2007
This one just left me completely confused..