Chapter 1 Page 3
LilJoe on June 13, 2007
yup, been a while, im ready to do regular updates like I used to do so look fer one every thursday or friday. hope I did ok on tha page yall.
-Lil Joe Thabooka-
Muteki Ikusa
LilJoe on June 13, 2007
yup, been a while, im ready to do regular updates like I used to do so look fer one every thursday or friday. hope I did ok on tha page yall.
-Lil Joe Thabooka-
Nigellashade at 7:41AM, July 2, 2007
Dearest LilJoe, your works has a interesting view on a attack scene. By seeing how you've drawn the impact, (it's very well done). I like the drawn strokes on the fighting stance, plus by drawing the challenger pushed on the force of the impact.. by you shading his form, and the only focus is the main character.. It does leave a sense of a fighters thoughts, and how he reflects in his situation into view. Glad you've updated, even though It was updated some time ago. Keep up the good work LilJoe, I'm pleased with your works. With hugs & snuggles! ~M~
arin_ann at 5:13PM, June 17, 2007
That first panel is one of your best. Needs a bit more implied motion, either through lines, or body positioning. The guy flying about could have been drawn more clearly. Not bad. ~rin_rin_89, MA