I try to seperate the boxes so that it doesn't look [u][b]TOO[/u][/b] close to the other box, just so it adds a special suprise to the next panel and the reader doesn't expect what is to happen, but okay >.
Look's good. Fave, but the only problem I'm seeing is that the panel's are too far away from each other. It's what you call gutter panels. As weel, some of the text touches the wordballoons. Try fixing up some of that stuff, and it could be much better.
Iggythehedgehog at 6:30AM, Nov. 1, 2008
That looked so cool!good job
xaxelx at 8:07AM, July 14, 2008
I try to seperate the boxes so that it doesn't look [u][b]TOO[/u][/b] close to the other box, just so it adds a special suprise to the next panel and the reader doesn't expect what is to happen, but okay >.
poonipoonz at 1:23PM, July 13, 2008
Look's good. Fave, but the only problem I'm seeing is that the panel's are too far away from each other. It's what you call gutter panels. As weel, some of the text touches the wordballoons. Try fixing up some of that stuff, and it could be much better.
xaxelx at 11:34AM, July 13, 2008
:)
Seelinkrun11 at 11:16AM, July 13, 2008
Awesome effects! Naruto p0wns!
xaxelx at 11:09AM, July 13, 2008
Thank you very much for the compliment. I'll put more effort into the close-ups. xD
Ketiou at 10:58AM, July 13, 2008
Not bad I like the panels and the close up ness but try and do more close ups. It makes it looks more awesome! Anyways good job. ENjoy! 5