Page 2:Phoenix flower jutsu!
Pentop3 on June 15, 2008
CML 1 Sasuke:NO CREDIT NEEDED
Pain's Rinnegan:NO CREDIT NEEDED
Windmill shuriken:medevenx
Sasuke CM spread: Twilight_Sasuke
Naruto never giveup never back down
Pentop3 on June 15, 2008
CML 1 Sasuke:NO CREDIT NEEDED
Pain's Rinnegan:NO CREDIT NEEDED
Windmill shuriken:medevenx
Sasuke CM spread: Twilight_Sasuke
Pentop3 at 12:17PM, June 16, 2008
i know i'm fixing that now on the next pages thanks for telling me
Oriru at 10:55AM, June 16, 2008
You are using so much waste space... Not to mention waste pages. That shuriken? drawing animation you could have inserted in to one panel, stead of wasting like four panels to it which you could've used for plot advancement. Six'th panel makes no sense at all, what is that ball? Nothing intresting is really happening over there and also text is going over the speech bubble which is never a good thing. Also, watching the same dull background makes things even more boring. You could give them a close up panels to make things more intresting.