part one
snapperc on Aug. 7, 2007
A re-done version of my first ever webcomic. Obviously it's still lame, but I just really enjoy experimenting on this. As this is inspired by the newspaper strips I used to read now and again when I was young, I may just skip whole chapters of the story, so it feels like when you miss a day or so of your daiy strips, and you have no idea what the hell is going on when you next read it…
Air Raid Robertson at 3:50PM, May 7, 2009
I dig the art style. The splotches of black remind me of Alex Toth. I agree with boosting the panel size. I know you're trying to emulate newspaper strips, but even they have a little bit more room in them.
PakRat at 6:15PM, March 6, 2008
Well, so far so good. It looks and feels like a modern day noir story. You're doing a good job, but I hope the panels are bigger in the future 'cause I really can't see whats goin' on.