Yeah, I updated, No need to Point it out.
sessy6 on Nov. 23, 2007
Yes, I'm back.
Bah, Its not much.
Check for Spelling/Punctuation/Grammar for me, Someone, Since I can't be fucked.
I Just wanna' Get onto the more fun-to-make pages, Then the pages will just come Flying in.
Plot-wise
This is the Oldest, First main charicter we've met so far, Her name is stella, And She's 13.
And, yes, The 5th panel is kinda cheesey and lame, But I didn't know what to put.
EDIT!
Forgot the meanwhile sign..
:D
sessy6 at 9:27AM, Nov. 30, 2007
Oh, I thought I uploadede the checked one.. Well, It should show up soon.. :D Glad you like it, Aaron..
Twin at 1:50PM, Nov. 29, 2007
panel 1 - 'professor' and 'promised' panel 2 - 'mum's' and 'suppose' Otherwise, I likes!
sessy6 at 11:15AM, Nov. 26, 2007
Cuz' Sneasals part of the plot moron. And Abra's in the plot anyway.
Tam7 at 8:26AM, Nov. 26, 2007
a sneasal? Why not a Abra!
ManaBlitz at 8:06PM, Nov. 24, 2007
Since you asked us to check spelling and whatnot, "suppose" is spelled incorrectly. Other than that, it looks good to me.
sessy6 at 11:38AM, Nov. 24, 2007
I would, If I could get the stroke on rounded rectangular anti-ailised. @Will:Its the morning, I Was just thinking in the games, it goes dark when they come in and out of buildings, So I did it. @Arc:Well theres nothing of significance in any other part of the house, So I didn't feel the need to make the panels Bigger.
KevinClifford at 10:18AM, Nov. 24, 2007
lol @ proffesser & prommissed Also, use bloody rounded rectangular textboxes. Rectangular is for the lose. (And don't say you can't, cause, like, Kyle does it, and he uses Elements, too.)
Arc at 8:23AM, Nov. 24, 2007
He darkened those panels because they have no real importance, well thats what I think.
Walrus at 7:19AM, Nov. 24, 2007
it's about time you updated. It's been forever!
will123 at 6:01AM, Nov. 24, 2007
Well on the last panel it's night time, but in the house there was light shining out the window.
Arc at 4:25AM, Nov. 24, 2007
Apart from what Danskeren said I can't really find any flaws. It's quite good too. But the panels are bit small fr my liking, but there's still no problems really.
sessy6 at 4:14AM, Nov. 24, 2007
Thanks. Oh yeah.. I should Know that, Since we just spent a week in school doing that.. >_< I'll change it soon.
Danskeren at 4:12AM, Nov. 24, 2007
You've got a couple of misspellings and you seem to forget the "'"s, when you want to replace "is" with "s".. But nevertheless this page looks great! ^_^
sessy6 at 4:00AM, Nov. 24, 2007
Oh, Shit, I forgot to put the Meanwhile Sign in the corner. Will be fixed soon.