So Amy wasn't able to defeat Fearow but at least the victorebell were able to help and where is Wally and Chris hmmmmm what is going on? let me know what you think.
Better...better...but when I said to use exclamation points, I only meant to use one, lol. When you want to use more, like three, it's only for like if your character is yelling or whatever.
Oh, and make sure you get some expressions in there too; make the characters more lively. Like the eyes you used for panel 5, was also needed in panel 1.
But yeah, YOU'RE GETTIN' BETTER. ;D
Loybok at 6:37PM, Feb. 8, 2011
Thanks dude
Brawllucas at 3:25PM, Feb. 8, 2011
Better...better...but when I said to use exclamation points, I only meant to use one, lol. When you want to use more, like three, it's only for like if your character is yelling or whatever. Oh, and make sure you get some expressions in there too; make the characters more lively. Like the eyes you used for panel 5, was also needed in panel 1. But yeah, YOU'RE GETTIN' BETTER. ;D
Loybok at 5:32PM, Feb. 5, 2011
lol thanks
Supah Sonic at 12:22PM, Feb. 5, 2011
dude....this has 12 pages and its in chapter 2....mine is at 38 pages and im on chapter 3.....either im slow or your fast