#1 Leave...the box...ALONE!!!
Frost Knight on April 5, 2010
Ok, basically, this just shows Zoey whining about moving, and seeing a rumbling box.
Before anyone asks, around the box is a pshycic effect(or so I hope) made with a paint.net. If you have any tips to make it better, please tell me.
Tell me what you think,rate,etc.
necrolichmon at 5:21PM, May 2, 2010
must know whats in box!
Supah Sonic at 7:23PM, April 6, 2010
thats just......funny
Snowninja at 8:32AM, April 6, 2010
Awesome first page! You are very good with sprite comics!
Frost Knight at 6:14AM, April 6, 2010
Thanks!^^ And I'll read it straight away!
reddragon142 at 6:11AM, April 6, 2010
i forgot to say, but if you need any help fell free to ask, i just don't use paint.net so i cant help you with that so just PQ me if you need anything, and if you want too read my comic, i updated it yesterday ^^
Frost Knight at 5:12AM, April 6, 2010
Thanks!^^ And yeah,maybe it wasn't a good idea to make the outlines on the letters, and making Groudon getting married with a Kyogre.^^; And don't worry, I'll improve(or so I hope).
reddragon142 at 4:57AM, April 6, 2010
not that bad for a beginer, atleast this page is alot better than the cover, the cover really needs to be revamped so i'll give you a 5 and fav this ^^ try to improve