in this page only 2 things to improve
1 - men u really need to use emotions, in the first 2 panels everything is ok, but in the other 2 u should've add some expressions
2 - get a new recolor of your main character hair, the one u're using now looks pretty bad, the shading isn't good, try to make a better one using cmore similiar colors
DarkSpark at 10:51PM, Dec. 10, 2009
dude i like the side kick sprite the best. try to ask around for help with custom sprites. the're are alot of ppl on DD who r willing to help
melvin2898 at 6:02PM, Dec. 10, 2009
Spelling errors have got to go.Also ask someone to help you with custom sprites.
reddragon142 at 8:42AM, Dec. 10, 2009
in this page only 2 things to improve 1 - men u really need to use emotions, in the first 2 panels everything is ok, but in the other 2 u should've add some expressions 2 - get a new recolor of your main character hair, the one u're using now looks pretty bad, the shading isn't good, try to make a better one using cmore similiar colors
DarkSpark at 6:44AM, Dec. 10, 2009
dude acc. to the main page it say u updated again but its still the same page..
DarkSpark at 12:07AM, Dec. 10, 2009
noob...