004: Frontal Assult
Ricon X on May 14, 2007
well my 4th comic is here enjoy
and i styled the recouler of magma on a pokemon can you guess what pokemon it ws well comment to help me improve
Pokemon Delux adventures
Ricon X on May 14, 2007
well my 4th comic is here enjoy
and i styled the recouler of magma on a pokemon can you guess what pokemon it ws well comment to help me improve
Ice at 9:12AM, May 16, 2007
Team Dna man has a Magma symbol....... and the pokemon came out of there balls really tiny or are they babys or sonething ?
Ice at 9:11AM, May 16, 2007
Team Dna man has a Magma symbol....... and the pokemon came out of there balls really tiny or are they babys or sonething ?
Ricon X at 11:41PM, May 15, 2007
ohh ok thank you i will improve
K Squared at 3:42PM, May 15, 2007
Wow...they have really long and lopsided eyebrows... Oh, the text sounds too un-natural, say it in your head, and then write how you would say it. Like instead of: I have been itching to battle all day. It would sound better: I've been itching to battle all day!