01: Battles Begin
JC3 on Sept. 22, 2009
First Page and I Like It!!!!!
Jay and JB battle but JB is the pretty boy type
so he treats his pokemon like that too.
COMIC WEBSITE: http://pgthecomic.webs.com/
Pokemon Glory
JC3 on Sept. 22, 2009
First Page and I Like It!!!!!
Jay and JB battle but JB is the pretty boy type
so he treats his pokemon like that too.
COMIC WEBSITE: http://pgthecomic.webs.com/
suciue at 11:46AM, Oct. 15, 2009
its ok..though its hard to use origanal charators they just need more personality . or at least mix them up with diffrent thing on my comic the pokemon are not origanal but im working on trainer sprits it fun mixing and maching hair and cloths
JC3 at 3:13PM, Sept. 23, 2009
Thanks Guys!!!!! @Veqito Ill Try Better Next Time!!!!
xVegitox at 2:33PM, Sept. 23, 2009
This is pretty good but, too many minor mistake. Try adding a border to your text bubbles it makes them more appealing. Uh don't use too many exclamation marks. I mean I think 3 is good enough. use "!!!" not, "!!!!!!!!!!". It just wasted space. You gotta cut a little bit down on the empty space. I liked the battle scene, but you shoulda' used a sprite to show that the razor leaf hit. I'll give you a 5 since its your first issue, but next time I wont be as nice =P
PokePanz123 at 2:05PM, Sept. 23, 2009
No offence dude but maybe make your own Characters? its makes the comic more interesting. Overall nice job dude!