Chapter 1 Page 8
soniccomicwriter on Oct. 4, 2006
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soniccomicwriter on Oct. 4, 2006
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Sniper at 2:35AM, Oct. 5, 2006
This one panel comic is too cluttered. 3-6 panels are the best and MAYBE the occasionly 1 or 8-10 panel comic. and I have no idea who's talking without aspeech bubble tail!
Champtim at 10:53PM, Oct. 4, 2006
First: Needs more pannels. second: needs speech bubbles.