anonymous at 6:20PM, Sept. 10, 2010

Oh boo hoo I'm Anonymous. Big fucking deal, live with it you retard. Work on your grammar too, it's God awful.

Ettie at 7:47PM, Sept. 9, 2010

Wow, your chat bubbles and style have improved greatly. Nice job with your page! It's looking a lot better.

Kris1 at 2:19PM, Sept. 7, 2010

zt2maniac "your" grammar needs a lot of work in and of itself

zt2maniac at 4:03AM, Sept. 7, 2010

Your the real retard going Anonymous. And Your the idiot cause your point your trying to make is pointless. Forget the part where it's a Pokemon comic and just think of it as a comic.

anonymous at 8:27PM, Sept. 6, 2010

I do know what realism is, it's just retarded to bitch about it in a Pokemon sprite comic of all things, I could actually follow it just fine so far, I think you're the one being slow here. Also you spelled "Sense" like "Since" again. Retard.

zt2maniac at 7:45PM, Sept. 6, 2010

Anon who said anything about realism, when you learn what realism means then you can comment. And yes it matters if it does make since! No one wants to read a random out of whack i don't get it comic. Plus anon your taking the term of Sense out of term. I said the plot makes no sense not Pokemon are you slow.

Snowninja at 5:00PM, Sept. 6, 2010

I truly think that you have great potential, Khris1!What I see on this comic page is a great story, it may seem hard to desenvolve it, but everybody must make the first step, right? You can make whatever story you want, all you need are two things you already have within you, courage to start a story and imagination to desenvolve it.If you need help, contact me, and I'll be willing to give all the help possible for you. I'll be viewing your comic more times, to see your abilities and give a helping hand, so don't give up.

ozzy1181 at 2:39PM, Sept. 6, 2010

he might just have a short attention span... its lik: THE WORLD WILL END IN AN HOUR UNLESS WE DO SOMETH... Oooh, a puppy! XD

anonymous at 2:24PM, Sept. 6, 2010

Since when did the Pokemon universe ever make any "since" anyways? I mean this is a world where long tongued pink humanoids walk around and yellow mice can electrocute people, compared to that, his dad "randomly" dying and Billy "randomly" arriving on a Gyarados doesn't seem so convoluted, now does it? Oh but no, Pokemon comics MUST have REALISM!

Kris1 at 2:18PM, Sept. 6, 2010

[quote][b]Your grammar needs majoooorrrrrr work[/b], can't understand half the stuff he's saying, plus this makes no [b]since[/b] either![/quote] i think this is irony

anonymous at 2:18PM, Sept. 6, 2010

KD! Let me borrow your hat...

PKNESS at 2:15PM, Sept. 6, 2010

ACTUALLY, it looks way better than the other one. But that doesn't mean it needs improvment. His dad is dying on his front lawn, add some emotion!!! Can't just keep a blank face. You can think of us as JERKS all you want, but it actuality, we are helping you. So, throw a tantrum, but remember we're helping.

anonymous at 2:10PM, Sept. 6, 2010

We know you suck. You know you suck. Why don't you just give up?

zt2maniac at 2:03PM, Sept. 6, 2010

Your grammar needs majoooorrrrrr work, can't understand half the stuff he's saying, plus this makes no since either! Wth his Dad just randomly dies on the ground and his uncle randomly appears on a gyrados? Where does this make any sense, plus you didn't have to restart cause were jerks, you had to restart cause this is bad.

Kris1 at 1:59PM, Sept. 6, 2010

thanks for the blank one >:(

JShark at 1:38PM, Sept. 6, 2010

exactly, cause now we know its a big deal cause youve told us but we never would have gotten that from the comic. to help with emotions try using these http://www.spriters-resource.com/ds/pokeheartgoldsoulsilver/sheet/30497 Also here http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/Kris1Kris.png heres some sprites you can use until you find make some really good ones.

Brawllucas at 1:29PM, Sept. 6, 2010

Yeah just add more expressions next time. :)

Kris1 at 1:29PM, Sept. 6, 2010

He shouts noo and is left alone until uncle billy comes.

JShark at 1:28PM, Sept. 6, 2010

the problem is is that you dont make it seem like one in the comic

Kris1 at 1:26PM, Sept. 6, 2010

his dad dying is a big deal!

Brawllucas at 1:26PM, Sept. 6, 2010

Dude, you need to stop being so harsh. We are NOT jerks, and it DOES NOT look terrible. You're getting a LOT better, bro. You really are. Now, make sure you don't save the page on JPEG next time, it makes it all blurry. And make sure to add some expressions next time, it doesn't look like he cares that his dad is dying, yknow? And the Kris sprite is okay, but I'm gonna make one for you, if that's alright. You're getting better dude, you really are. :)

JShark at 1:19PM, Sept. 6, 2010

well its good that your using one style of sprites, but the only issue is your actual recolors. Kris should have that dark yellow as his main color on his hair and the lighter yellow should be the highlight. Also you should give his shirt a little shading and not just recolor the whole thing pure black. Reguarding why it looks terrible, that may be because you saved it as a jpg and not png or somthing of higher quality. Finally the simple story here, why did he just leave his dead father dead on the floor. He makes it seem like his dad dying is no big deal.

roomoo at 1:16PM, Sept. 6, 2010

inb4fagsthatdoesntknowwhatbitmixingmeans also lol gonna turn off anonymous since people seem to have a hard time arguing with me.