No, I'm not posting comments under my real name, but you know what? I don't have to, because my name's on my comics' title pages, and also in my profile but if you're too lazy to see for yourself I'll say it here. I'm Dylan Letourneau, or if you want the whole thing; Dylan Patrick Letourneau.
Let me guess though, you're gonna stay an anon everywhere but the "safety" of your profile? Am I right? I think I'm right.
anonymous
at 5:13PM, Sept. 10, 2010
Well, you're not posting under your real name.
So technically speaking we're all anonymous, even when we don't hit that little anonymous box, we're both still hiding behind the internet.
Man I'm deep.
anonymous
at 5:09PM, Sept. 10, 2010
get the stick out of your ass about anonymity on the internet
Ok at this point all of these comments are pointless. Everyone giving constructive criticism is going to get ignored and we have to deal with that.
It would be easier to just stop commenting and leave this comic to rot in noob comic hell.
also @Yellow devil just stop talking.
Hey Kris1, you could just mute out the comments from people that are being annoying. It's what I'm doing with the annoying anonymous commentors, by the way, your comic ain't bad
[quote]POINT IS: You need to delete all your pages, take a hiatus, and come up with an actual story bro. Cuz putting Protoman in here, is A NO-NO.[/quote]
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: DELETE YOUR WHOLE COMIC.
ARGHHH! UNCLE BILLY! WHYYY!? He was my favourite character...
This comic is an emotional roller coaster!
Here's a tribute to Uncle Billy. He was taken from us too soon. Good night sweet prince...
[img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/4825/unclebilly.png[/img]
@Taco5: yes it does concern me as i am the pokemon pahntomia dreams defender!!!!!!
@PKNESS: oh fuck you!!!!!!!!!!!!! your going down now mother fucker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:((((
Ok... dude... it's like you never listen to our advice. Protoman CAN'T just come outta no where, HAVE A DIALGA, and train Kris! I mean, that's not even a pokemon background! Where did you even go? It shouldn't be Kris1 either, it should just be KRIS. That IS your name right? Dude, you got some ways to go. Taco5 pretty much covered all of it. I suggest you ACTUALLY come up with a story first, THEN make a comic. This one, is not good, my man. You can't just have the kid's dad dying, with no emotion, then his Uncle comes flying in without a proper intro. Then, they somehow magically transport to Celadon city. And I thought his dad died, not Uncle Billy.
POINT IS: You need to delete all your pages, take a hiatus, and come up with an actual story bro. Cuz putting Protoman in here, is A NO-NO.
And to this Yellow Devil Man Douche, why are you asking people for AIM? Kinda stalkerish to just yell at them because you think they're dissing Kris1 when we're telling him how to improve. Ugh, noobs these days. How am I gonna keep up? So Yellow Devil, stfu, because your comic isn't exactly the hottest thing on the web. So quit asking people for AIM, and just stfu, because you don't really know how to make comics either. K? Thnx.
what happened to uncle billy!?
but seriously Kris you need to listen to the critics, if you want to make the comic better and include protoman dont have him teleport out of nowhere join the first guy he meets and randomly have a pokemon.
Really nice page. I like the improvements being made. Nice improvement to your chat bubbles, and I really like how your comic is developing. Keep up the good work!
Make a comic, you get critics. Practice and improve yourself and you wouldn't have to go through this. Everything gets criticized sometime in its existence, and your comic's no exception. I've been criticized in the past as well, but you know what? I took peoples' advice, I practiced, and got better.
@ Yellow Devil Man: this doesn't concern you...
no but you have no reooom to speak about anything about how good a comic is. dO you have nothing better to do in your life than come and post things like that on my comic?
Wow, you really are a stubborn child aren't ya? Y'know, everyone else except the anons are just trying to help you. You could have just followed the original story you had instead of changing the whole thing, only the style had to change, but you yourself messed it up. Most of us aren't trying to be dicks or anything (far from it) it's a "tough love" method. Truth is, critics help you improve by pointing out what's wrong with something, and if you just ignore it, you won't get any better.
anonymous at 5:58PM, Sept. 10, 2010
I like how you're antagonizing me even though I've never said anything bad about you. Just cause "lawl U R ANONYMOUS" Real logic, right there.
anonymous at 5:51PM, Sept. 10, 2010
Cool story bro.
Taco5 at 5:48PM, Sept. 10, 2010
No, I'm not posting comments under my real name, but you know what? I don't have to, because my name's on my comics' title pages, and also in my profile but if you're too lazy to see for yourself I'll say it here. I'm Dylan Letourneau, or if you want the whole thing; Dylan Patrick Letourneau. Let me guess though, you're gonna stay an anon everywhere but the "safety" of your profile? Am I right? I think I'm right.
anonymous at 5:13PM, Sept. 10, 2010
Well, you're not posting under your real name. So technically speaking we're all anonymous, even when we don't hit that little anonymous box, we're both still hiding behind the internet. Man I'm deep.
anonymous at 5:09PM, Sept. 10, 2010
get the stick out of your ass about anonymity on the internet
Taco5 at 4:09PM, Sept. 10, 2010
And maybe you're a pussy. Oh, wait; you ARE for being anonymous. They really need to remove that option from the site.
anonymous at 2:55PM, Sept. 10, 2010
Maybe he IS a six year old.
Taco5 at 1:28PM, Sept. 10, 2010
@ JShark: Don't bother arguing with YDM, he has the mentality of a six-year-old.
JShark at 1:12PM, Sept. 10, 2010
um how do you know im running? your a random person behind a computer. you cant see what im doing. so shut up. kthxbai
zt2maniac at 1:01PM, Sept. 10, 2010
Wow....This is the worst thing I've ever seen, I've seen bad comics but this is really bad, the worst
YELLOW DEVIL MAN at 11:44AM, Sept. 10, 2010
@JShark: why dont you make me, bitch? yeah you better run, assholes
JShark at 9:10AM, Sept. 10, 2010
Ok at this point all of these comments are pointless. Everyone giving constructive criticism is going to get ignored and we have to deal with that. It would be easier to just stop commenting and leave this comic to rot in noob comic hell. also @Yellow devil just stop talking.
Dark Ninja at 6:24AM, Sept. 10, 2010
Hey Kris1, you could just mute out the comments from people that are being annoying. It's what I'm doing with the annoying anonymous commentors, by the way, your comic ain't bad
darkpower101010 at 8:57PM, Sept. 9, 2010
[quote]POINT IS: You need to delete all your pages, take a hiatus, and come up with an actual story bro. Cuz putting Protoman in here, is A NO-NO.[/quote] CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM: DELETE YOUR WHOLE COMIC.
darkpower101010 at 8:51PM, Sept. 9, 2010
ARGHHH! UNCLE BILLY! WHYYY!? He was my favourite character... This comic is an emotional roller coaster! Here's a tribute to Uncle Billy. He was taken from us too soon. Good night sweet prince... [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/4825/unclebilly.png[/img]
YELLOW DEVIL MAN at 8:40PM, Sept. 9, 2010
@Taco5: yes it does concern me as i am the pokemon pahntomia dreams defender!!!!!! @PKNESS: oh fuck you!!!!!!!!!!!!! your going down now mother fucker!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:((((
PKNESS at 8:23PM, Sept. 9, 2010
Ok... dude... it's like you never listen to our advice. Protoman CAN'T just come outta no where, HAVE A DIALGA, and train Kris! I mean, that's not even a pokemon background! Where did you even go? It shouldn't be Kris1 either, it should just be KRIS. That IS your name right? Dude, you got some ways to go. Taco5 pretty much covered all of it. I suggest you ACTUALLY come up with a story first, THEN make a comic. This one, is not good, my man. You can't just have the kid's dad dying, with no emotion, then his Uncle comes flying in without a proper intro. Then, they somehow magically transport to Celadon city. And I thought his dad died, not Uncle Billy. POINT IS: You need to delete all your pages, take a hiatus, and come up with an actual story bro. Cuz putting Protoman in here, is A NO-NO. And to this Yellow Devil Man Douche, why are you asking people for AIM? Kinda stalkerish to just yell at them because you think they're dissing Kris1 when we're telling him how to improve. Ugh, noobs these days. How am I gonna keep up? So Yellow Devil, stfu, because your comic isn't exactly the hottest thing on the web. So quit asking people for AIM, and just stfu, because you don't really know how to make comics either. K? Thnx.
JShark at 8:14PM, Sept. 9, 2010
what happened to uncle billy!? but seriously Kris you need to listen to the critics, if you want to make the comic better and include protoman dont have him teleport out of nowhere join the first guy he meets and randomly have a pokemon.
Ettie at 7:53PM, Sept. 9, 2010
Really nice page. I like the improvements being made. Nice improvement to your chat bubbles, and I really like how your comic is developing. Keep up the good work!
Taco5 at 7:31PM, Sept. 9, 2010
Make a comic, you get critics. Practice and improve yourself and you wouldn't have to go through this. Everything gets criticized sometime in its existence, and your comic's no exception. I've been criticized in the past as well, but you know what? I took peoples' advice, I practiced, and got better. @ Yellow Devil Man: this doesn't concern you...
Brawllucas at 7:09PM, Sept. 9, 2010
Of course we have better things to do. But you keep using THAT has your defense. Im not gonna get in it cuz Taco mostly said everything.
YELLOW DEVIL MAN at 6:53PM, Sept. 9, 2010
hey taco5 whats ur aim?
Kris1 at 6:50PM, Sept. 9, 2010
no but you have no reooom to speak about anything about how good a comic is. dO you have nothing better to do in your life than come and post things like that on my comic?
Taco5 at 6:21PM, Sept. 9, 2010
Wow, you really are a stubborn child aren't ya? Y'know, everyone else except the anons are just trying to help you. You could have just followed the original story you had instead of changing the whole thing, only the style had to change, but you yourself messed it up. Most of us aren't trying to be dicks or anything (far from it) it's a "tough love" method. Truth is, critics help you improve by pointing out what's wrong with something, and if you just ignore it, you won't get any better.
Kris1 at 6:04PM, Sept. 9, 2010
F**CK YOU