I'm not going to rate this. But,what on earth gave you an Idea this was good?
First off,get some of the main character on the first page,and Manaphy and Pkion beside them.
Second-Get rid of the "Special effects" and the 2-tone background. It's a eyesore.
Third-Try using something else than MS paint,to type text,never use paint tools to make words.
Fleeka at 1:35PM, May 29, 2007
LOL THIS IS THE BEST COMIC EVARR!!!
BaronPedro at 2:06AM, March 6, 2007
TERRIBLE. GO DROWN YOUR CAT
GuerrillaClock at 1:32PM, March 5, 2007
are you really 10...? well its a poor start. but dont give up! look how uch i improved for one thing.
Megasonic at 2:48PM, Jan. 28, 2007
You tried.
Toadette at 3:07PM, Jan. 13, 2007
ok!It funny looking
Chibijo at 10:47AM, Dec. 28, 2006
remember when i said you rate this a 1 but say REALLY bad things isnt nice
Chibijo at 7:35PM, Dec. 23, 2006
ok i'll try to make a new title with all your guys advice yet! i need assistance!
mudkip53 at 6:23PM, Dec. 23, 2006
WELL YOU TRYED.
Nalver at 3:15PM, Dec. 23, 2006
Some comics suck. This one stings eyes.
a generic black mage at 10:05PM, Dec. 22, 2006
Me eyes ggghfguxjrylxyi.; yo.;
NeonYo at 7:07PM, Dec. 22, 2006
Wait, you're ten?!
Rags at 6:58PM, Dec. 22, 2006
I'm not going to rate this. But,what on earth gave you an Idea this was good? First off,get some of the main character on the first page,and Manaphy and Pkion beside them. Second-Get rid of the "Special effects" and the 2-tone background. It's a eyesore. Third-Try using something else than MS paint,to type text,never use paint tools to make words.
Chibijo at 4:32PM, Dec. 22, 2006
Yeah but all this is just the title i dont care if it's a 1
trickman at 3:38PM, Dec. 22, 2006
What... the... hell... is that?!
jef dam5 at 3:38PM, Dec. 22, 2006
Oh hell >.> You can't possibly say this is good. There's a DD user that's 9 which does stuff better >.>
will123 at 3:34PM, Dec. 22, 2006
incourage you
Chibijo at 2:51PM, Dec. 22, 2006
oh well i tried my best! =) i wont make any more!
Chibijo at 2:49PM, Dec. 22, 2006
you dont like it? =(
WiredTH at 2:47PM, Dec. 22, 2006
You lose!!!!!
KevinClifford at 2:42PM, Dec. 22, 2006
..Ewe >_>
Chibijo at 2:36PM, Dec. 22, 2006
and sometimes at the spriter's resourse
Chibijo at 2:36PM, Dec. 22, 2006
from pokebeach and do you like the title i'm only 10
Chibijo at 2:35PM, Dec. 22, 2006
given major credit to pokebeach.com
anonymous at 2:30PM, Dec. 22, 2006
where do you get your sprites
Chibijo at 2:27PM, Dec. 22, 2006
and i'm 10