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selkielili on Oct. 20, 2010
First page yay~
I hope you guys like this when it gets going
EDIT: added a background, although it's not much I think it does make it look a bit better. I won't be redoing any more pages after this one enless I get more advice on how to improve. Also The cover is updated so tell me what you guys think.
locoroco1 at 10:04PM, Oct. 21, 2010
There's no background to add emphasis.
xVegitox at 1:20PM, Oct. 21, 2010
From the looks of things, seems like you're new to sprite comics? You should add backgrounds to your panels. But this isn't too bad, if it had a background I'd say it'd be perfect. So work on putting some backgrounds into this comic.