Ok, well, if you want my advic, I don't thign you're ready to post this comic yet,you obviosly haven't had enough practice. You have a lot of potential, But heres some things I would suggest doing. First of all, take this off the internet. Keep writing it becuase it's good practice, but don't post it. Also, practice ALOT MORE on making charectors. Try drawing the charector on paper, then doing you're best to make someone that looks liek that. Also, your word bubbles are pretty bad too. Dont number them, Whover is speaking first, put there words higher than the second persons. Also, quit bit mixing. I have to redo over 40 pages becuase I did that. It's just a bad idea.anyway, I hope I did't come off as mean, I really do think you have a lot of potential.
AcaciaCooperMaund at 4:06AM, Oct. 9, 2012
Will there ever be anymore comics?
anonymous at 3:51PM, July 25, 2011
fuck you pokecode his comics are goods
pokecode at 3:15PM, June 25, 2011
Ok, well, if you want my advic, I don't thign you're ready to post this comic yet,you obviosly haven't had enough practice. You have a lot of potential, But heres some things I would suggest doing. First of all, take this off the internet. Keep writing it becuase it's good practice, but don't post it. Also, practice ALOT MORE on making charectors. Try drawing the charector on paper, then doing you're best to make someone that looks liek that. Also, your word bubbles are pretty bad too. Dont number them, Whover is speaking first, put there words higher than the second persons. Also, quit bit mixing. I have to redo over 40 pages becuase I did that. It's just a bad idea.anyway, I hope I did't come off as mean, I really do think you have a lot of potential.