All I did was help you and you mute AND report my comment! And then you go anonymous and basically frame me! I mean, seriously, I like to help people and if you want to be an ass, ok be one! I mean, seriously, do you guys REALLY think I wrote that?
I know you said, don't bother hiding it. And will you stop giving comics a rating of four when it's way much better than your comic. Anyway, here's what you said on Pokemon Contest Challenge:
[quote] YOU EAT THE POO OF DOGS AND RATS AND COWS AND UR MOTHERS SAID BY VinceHatesRooster, u r a dog [/quote]
Vince is right those pokemon are cliche try being different from everyone else;
1- Only show the panels dont have endless blank spaces
2- stretch and skew by 00 (100,200,300,400 etc.)
3- Make it clearer i dont know about anyone else but i dont know whos getting who in the last panel
If you need any more help feel free to PQ me and I will gladly help you :) im gonna give you the benefit of the doubt and give a 3 cos its got potential
Dude, theres too much white and question, why in the world did you mute and report my comment? That was criticism and sorry about the cursing and all, but I got it that way too when I did a pokemon comic. Pidgey and Rattata are cliche.
Some words of advice
1. get reall speach bubbles or ballons whatever you want to call them.
2.cut out the Excess stuff IE all the extra white
3. get ride of the numbers by the text bubbles
4.Make yourself a base and have equal sized frames
VinceLikesRooster at 8:18PM, Dec. 14, 2007
IT WASNT OFFENSIVE! HOW DID IT OFFEND YOU!?
ElectricMaster at 7:42PM, Dec. 14, 2007
CAUSE ITS OFFENSIVE
VinceLikesRooster at 10:58PM, Dec. 13, 2007
uh-huh, right! And its obvious its you! Now you havent answered my question, why the hell did you report my comment?
ElectricMaster at 6:49PM, Dec. 13, 2007
LOOK I god promise swear whatever you call it my cousin wrote it.IF im found guilty then I swear i'll kill myself.IM SORRy
KevinClifford at 5:03PM, Dec. 13, 2007
Vince, get used to it, or quit before you can't ;P
VinceLikesRooster at 1:41PM, Dec. 13, 2007
All I did was help you and you mute AND report my comment! And then you go anonymous and basically frame me! I mean, seriously, I like to help people and if you want to be an ass, ok be one! I mean, seriously, do you guys REALLY think I wrote that?
Walrus at 12:31PM, Dec. 13, 2007
I know you said, don't bother hiding it. And will you stop giving comics a rating of four when it's way much better than your comic. Anyway, here's what you said on Pokemon Contest Challenge: [quote] YOU EAT THE POO OF DOGS AND RATS AND COWS AND UR MOTHERS SAID BY VinceHatesRooster, u r a dog [/quote]
Lukas Kirkby at 11:36AM, Dec. 13, 2007
Anonymous, don't be so blunt and abusive. Calling him a noob won't get him anywhere will it?
anonymous at 10:55AM, Dec. 13, 2007
I have nouhing to say but f...ing do what they say it will make you good at makeing comics and not make you look like a noob.
KevinClifford at 10:19AM, Dec. 13, 2007
1.) In English, which I'll assume is your native language (if it wasn't, you wouldn't be doing an English comic, or - for that matter - be on an English website), we read left to right. Top to bottom. Put the speech bubbles (and panels) in that order, kthxbai. 2.) Fill in behind the text with white. 3.) Do not color code the text, or the textboxes for that matter. 4.) A tail is a triangle. Not a Line. 5.) Treecko's not the PMD sprite. It's obviously Ranger (which was on the DS, so it's bitmixing.) 6.) Speaking of bit mixing... FRLG and RSE are two completely different perspectives, and thusly should never come in contact with each other. Now stop mixing them together. 7.) Every single Pokémon (Not just Rattata and Pidgey) that appears on this page is cliché. As all hell. Stop using them. 8.) The animation for catching is awful. 9.) The trainers are standing on the grass. That's improbable. They should be standing [i][b]in[/b][/i] the grass.
Poke Alster at 9:24AM, Dec. 13, 2007
Vince is right those pokemon are cliche try being different from everyone else; 1- Only show the panels dont have endless blank spaces 2- stretch and skew by 00 (100,200,300,400 etc.) 3- Make it clearer i dont know about anyone else but i dont know whos getting who in the last panel If you need any more help feel free to PQ me and I will gladly help you :) im gonna give you the benefit of the doubt and give a 3 cos its got potential
VinceLikesRooster at 8:48AM, Dec. 13, 2007
Dude, theres too much white and question, why in the world did you mute and report my comment? That was criticism and sorry about the cursing and all, but I got it that way too when I did a pokemon comic. Pidgey and Rattata are cliche.
JayX at 4:53AM, Dec. 13, 2007
Some words of advice 1. get reall speach bubbles or ballons whatever you want to call them. 2.cut out the Excess stuff IE all the extra white 3. get ride of the numbers by the text bubbles 4.Make yourself a base and have equal sized frames
Black Madness at 4:51AM, Dec. 13, 2007
It's all ok, but you have spelling errors and in some panel the text is hard to read.