...*Sigh* Where to start? You need to work on grammar. A lot. Make the text bubbles face the characters and for gods sake, actually think about your story. Dev joining seemed so... Random. Characters need motivation or they get stale. Other then that... I don't have many complaints. Yet. I'm not sure how long till you screw up. Out of PURE niceness, I'm not even gonna rate.
ShadowScar Knight at 7:12PM, May 3, 2009
I agree with Altune and Zoom (from the page before). Fix up your grammar, think about how stuff will flow in your comic and please stabilize your plot. Really, right now it just seems like you're reaching for random things to use as comic material and slapping them on a comic page. It makes things rugged and rushed, which makes the comic rather unbelievable. and as they -- Altune and Zoom -- have both said, the way Devvy joined in seems kinda random, especially how instantly he does so. I think it would have been better if he were to have joined at a later time, like a Pokémon Center, but eh.
Princess_Eevee9 at 7:31PM, May 2, 2009
Cool D=!!
Altune at 8:21PM, May 1, 2009
...*Sigh* Where to start? You need to work on grammar. A lot. Make the text bubbles face the characters and for gods sake, actually think about your story. Dev joining seemed so... Random. Characters need motivation or they get stale. Other then that... I don't have many complaints. Yet. I'm not sure how long till you screw up. Out of PURE niceness, I'm not even gonna rate.
Devvy at 8:52AM, May 1, 2009
:D happyface Also just a tip...try and make the text tail points pointed in the direction of their mouths, works better like that