Pg 1-2
snark on March 28, 2007
The story continues…
I'm actually pretty pissed with how this page turned out, I wanted a more gag-a-day format for Project Mango whilst retaining an overall storyline and continuity. Obviously what skill I have as a writer isn't anyway near good enough, so unfortunately we'll have to bare these dreaded story progression pages till I start sucking less as a writer…
maritalbliss at 9:31PM, May 27, 2007
I really like the concept thus far...I would recommend boxes behind the narration--That way it doesn't distract from the art...I REALLY want to see this in color, or with bolder lines.
Priceman at 8:22AM, May 4, 2007
Great page. I like the mood you're setting.