PlayerOne at 10:05PM, Nov. 27, 2006

A: How the _____ do you forget speech bubbles? B: White space. C: Fix the speech bubbles.

incognito-mystery-person at 9:38PM, Nov. 23, 2006

Very nice. I agree with Wind- try inking it in pen. ^^- It makes the work look so nice. I do it whenever I'm just drawing random pictures. It makes the work look so much cleaner! And whenever you're doing the bubbles, just make little white circles and type the text over that, using a larger size- and perhaps a font like Comic sans or Times New Roman. Good luck! ^^- And I still love those colours, and admire your patience.

starkitty at 3:17AM, Nov. 21, 2006

*update

starkitty at 3:17AM, Nov. 21, 2006

omg updare and i misssed it T-T

Firoe of fire at 5:30PM, Nov. 20, 2006

Is it just me or is it blury.

wind at 3:18PM, Oct. 26, 2006

Nice story but do you think you could ink it in pen next time? Even though your forgot the speach bubble I can understand who's talking. The color looks great. And the font it easy to read some what but if it was a little bigger that would be even more awsome. Anyway good luck and can't wait for an update. Note: *Constructive critism

Chibi Pickles at 3:44PM, Oct. 14, 2006

What do you mean by disconcerting, magickmaker?

magickmaker at 2:11PM, Oct. 14, 2006

Nice coloring, but the text is a bit disconcerting, because of the colors underneath it. So, uh, good work.

Chibi Pickles at 1:07PM, Oct. 14, 2006

Fixed it :D

Chibi Pickles at 12:56PM, Oct. 14, 2006

Woops, forgot the speech bubbles, just a sec