okay in response to Vagabond the first good point i will keep that in mind for the next comic, the second if i keep it in multiple of 100 then naruto would be bigger than adult link and it wont be right if an adult is smaller than a child, i see what you mean i will change poses but i kept luigi's pose the same cause i wont turn my back to a yoshi, would you?
Here's a few random things. I'm not going to go into how much I like the comic, so um... I dunno, just assume that I'm some sort of rabid fanboy if you want to or something. : P
-Link kinda blends in with the background. You should put a black outline around him to help him stand out better.
-Naruto guy needs to be resized properly. (as in, only in multiples of 100) It looks gross otherwise.
-Could you have just changed something in the panels? I mean, seriously, you just made one panel and copied/pasted the rest. That's just incredibly lazy. Work on ways to have the characters make some kind of movement in between each panel. Just because you're a sprite comic doesn't mean you should give up on visuals.
So... yeah.
Ryu_The_Fox at 8:24AM, June 2, 2007
Luigi...I hate You when you're smart!! Well atleast he is skinnier than mario. Nice comic!
MediaMessiah at 2:40PM, May 31, 2007
okay in response to Vagabond the first good point i will keep that in mind for the next comic, the second if i keep it in multiple of 100 then naruto would be bigger than adult link and it wont be right if an adult is smaller than a child, i see what you mean i will change poses but i kept luigi's pose the same cause i wont turn my back to a yoshi, would you?
Vagabond at 2:27PM, May 31, 2007
Here's a few random things. I'm not going to go into how much I like the comic, so um... I dunno, just assume that I'm some sort of rabid fanboy if you want to or something. : P -Link kinda blends in with the background. You should put a black outline around him to help him stand out better. -Naruto guy needs to be resized properly. (as in, only in multiples of 100) It looks gross otherwise. -Could you have just changed something in the panels? I mean, seriously, you just made one panel and copied/pasted the rest. That's just incredibly lazy. Work on ways to have the characters make some kind of movement in between each panel. Just because you're a sprite comic doesn't mean you should give up on visuals. So... yeah.
THKNN_NUL at 12:33PM, May 31, 2007
Yeah! Smart&Evil Luigi! BOOYA!