Marrow96 at 8:43PM, Jan. 31, 2009

i have got to stop reading these comments first my brain almost exploded then a threw up a little in my mouth

Teava at 8:27PM, July 7, 2008

-stares- you shave your legs? Seriously, you need to talk to the guys I know and get them to shave. o.e I see their legs and its like 'fuck! put that away! there are CHILDREN here for yaoi's sake! D

luvmylab at 6:25PM, Feb. 2, 2007

I agree with most of what demagogue said(for once) XD but I think the little red line of hair looks neat. :)

a perfect opposite at 3:40PM, Feb. 2, 2007

XDDDDD i love your comment thank you i will take all these into thought when i work on my next one some thign i will keep how they are thought because i liek them for example the red highlight he ish the main character so he has to have that!!! and i liek the chibi look i'm not to shabby at realistic anime but i enjoy chibi the simplicity of it ish good ^^ AND I DO SHAVE MY LEGS! XDD

Demagogue at 8:38PM, Feb. 1, 2007

Ok well I want to start off by saying that I am happy to receive a request for advice and will usually honor such requests. Now to the rating and critique: The Good: 1) You have the “chibi” style art down pretty well. 2) The jokes aren’t bad and the text is easy to read. 3) You show improvement as the comic goes on. 4) You use fine dark lines usually which makes it a lot easier to see. The Decent: 1) There isn’t much shading, I would suggest experimenting with it. You can print out a copy and see what works and what doesn’t, try to make a base sketch and practice on it. 2) Some lines tend to be a little off, a good rule of thumb is “If it’s organic free hand it but if it’s mechanical use a ruler”. That’s a rule most artists follow as organic matter is rather imperfect and when you free hand it, it looks natural, but anything man made has a much stiffer frame/form. Even malleable things like fabric follow a pattern. The Bad: 1) Ok this jumps out right away, make sure to erase the ruler lines. While the lines on lined paper make it easier to draw you should erase them in a paint program (MS Paint or Photoshop). When you leave the lines it seems like you didn’t care enough to erase them rather than being part of the art work. Now this might create some white space leaving things looking a little bland but you can easily apply a light grey background or shade things to make it look better. 2) The red line on the hair just looks out of place most of the time. It’s hard to incorporate a single color into art that’s black and white otherwise. Sometimes it works (Sin City for example) but it’s a lot better to just shade it with a grey tone than put a red line. The red is just way to eye-catching and should probably be used if you want to clearly direct some ones attention to a specific item. 3) Make sure to spell check and reread everything, even the comments area. We are all capable of mistakes and improvement. Also the author’s comment area is just as much a part of the comic as the art. Over all it’s a decent comic, for what it is. Just remember that 3 is a medium score meaning that you are on the right track but could use some improvement. Also remember if you are going to wear a skirt being a guy is no excuse not to shave your legs.

luvmylab at 7:57PM, Feb. 1, 2007

ha sammy wammy looks like he's about to barf. lol this gets a five.

squeakyreaper at 5:01PM, Jan. 30, 2007

OH NOES. I don't think I'll be going to that one. Yao isn't exactly what I want to see. >>

a perfect opposite at 3:56PM, Jan. 30, 2007

http://www.drunkduck.com/Its_A_Boy_Thing/index.php GO THERE!!!! It's a boy thing ^^ best comic done bye KittyKattle90