I've just read through and it is pretty good.
The main guy is bad ass etc.
But seriously, I know hes a bad ass but right now he is too much of a jerk.
I cant see why I should be cheering him any more then the bird masked guys hes punching!
As far as I can tell he deserves to be tied to a post in the desert!
rhino577 at 7:55PM, Nov. 7, 2008
Yes, Big Ray is a jerk, but believe me when I say he's a really nice guy compared to everybody he beats the tar out of, or robs.
harkovast at 3:31PM, Nov. 7, 2008
I've just read through and it is pretty good. The main guy is bad ass etc. But seriously, I know hes a bad ass but right now he is too much of a jerk. I cant see why I should be cheering him any more then the bird masked guys hes punching! As far as I can tell he deserves to be tied to a post in the desert!