This comic looks great, but perhaps it could move a little faster?
I don't really know what is going on and who anyone is yet, so I am not really sure how the last bit was meant to make me feel.
Maybe you could put more text onto each page?
I will go out on a limb and guess those three guys were English and were planning to do something dastardly. They had that vibe.
I will certainly check in on this comic again to see how things develope.
harkovast at 6:22AM, Jan. 7, 2009
This comic looks great, but perhaps it could move a little faster? I don't really know what is going on and who anyone is yet, so I am not really sure how the last bit was meant to make me feel. Maybe you could put more text onto each page? I will go out on a limb and guess those three guys were English and were planning to do something dastardly. They had that vibe. I will certainly check in on this comic again to see how things develope.
taradaga at 4:51AM, Jan. 7, 2009
Staying tuned! Lovely so far.