Page 02
Redemption on May 3, 2007
Cue the guards. Or the military, rather. The nation Alenard's being held in has a lot of internal issues, and the occupying military of their neighbour country is only the START of their problems.
A pretty blocky panel design, now that I look at it. I think it works for the intro.
tammster at 8:56AM, March 2, 2010
Although you say you aren't great at telling stories I think your doing a mighty great job at it. :D
Redemption at 11:04AM, June 5, 2007
Hahaha, no problem at all. Its kind of funny to see so many posts, actually! XD It changed directions? Awesome! I was hoping this page would be a bit of a twist. ^^
Bocaj at 12:51PM, June 1, 2007
woah, sorry.
Bocaj at 12:51PM, June 1, 2007
Woah this comic just changed directions in my mind!
Bocaj at 12:51PM, June 1, 2007
Woah this comic just changed directions in my mind!
Bocaj at 12:51PM, June 1, 2007
Woah this comic just changed directions in my mind!
Redemption at 10:05PM, May 29, 2007
I suppose I always look at the things that aren't perfect in my work and cringe. Thanks D0m, Jofo - I'm slowly starting to take more pride in the pages I've been doing. Thanks, SilverWordz. I appreciate the encouragement a lot. :D
SilverWordz at 5:48PM, May 29, 2007
Your character designs are great, the line work on them is very nice. I really think the more and more you work on this, the more amazing it's going to become!
Jofo283 at 10:48PM, May 28, 2007
Yeah I agree with D0m, your art looks great.
D0m at 10:13AM, May 28, 2007
Excellent hook and dramatic panels. Uhm, what do you mean about not being able to draw well in that other page? This looks good.