Yeah, agree with Nickguy. IMO the last panel could have done without that word, and instead just add the shivering squigglies to the woman's hand indicating that she's clenching so hard her hand's shaking a bit.
Aside from that, I like the entire atmosphere buildup from page 1 to now. Feels like a play.
Survival Artist at 12:38PM, Aug. 13, 2009
gorgeous
miosamey at 11:26PM, April 4, 2009
i don't think this one belongs on drunkduck... shouldn't i be flipping through this at the graphic novel section of a bookstore?
darkwaterfrey at 8:04AM, March 28, 2009
Beautiful eyes and faces!
repoman at 10:36PM, March 27, 2009
Awesome art.
JillyFoo at 9:33AM, March 26, 2009
That is so sexy! I love you!
Tantz_Aerine at 5:53PM, March 24, 2009
This is a breathtaking, amazing piece of work from you! I can't wait to see more! Definitely fav'ed! Wow!
Hanzou at 7:30AM, March 23, 2009
Please continue this epic.
Nergal at 11:47AM, Feb. 27, 2009
great expressions. this comic is amazing.
mlai at 6:17AM, Feb. 18, 2009
Ooh, [b][i]stealth edit!![/b][/i] The new edited page looks great. Panel 3 especially.
Tashna at 1:30AM, Feb. 18, 2009
I love your artwork to death ;w;
mlai at 7:25PM, Feb. 16, 2009
Yeah, agree with Nickguy. IMO the last panel could have done without that word, and instead just add the shivering squigglies to the woman's hand indicating that she's clenching so hard her hand's shaking a bit. Aside from that, I like the entire atmosphere buildup from page 1 to now. Feels like a play.
NickGuy at 12:49PM, Feb. 16, 2009
pretty...but man oh man does that sound effect font in the last panel kill the mood.
TheMidge28 at 6:34AM, Feb. 16, 2009
the rendering of the soldiers face is quite excellent
Emily Elizabeth at 6:29AM, Feb. 16, 2009
Soooo beautiful!
Shewolf2 at 5:55AM, Feb. 16, 2009
Amazing shades and details!
rana at 5:11AM, Feb. 16, 2009
your fantastic, you really understand the human figure: )
BMR at 4:54AM, Feb. 16, 2009
Love the faces, excellent detail.
bishounen1012 at 4:15AM, Feb. 16, 2009
nice!
lookin for the truth at 2:15AM, Feb. 16, 2009
wow!!!!!!! ur awesome !!! i looove ur 3 comics the rock!
Hugo Maximo at 1:55AM, Feb. 16, 2009
Faved
Fenn at 12:44AM, Feb. 16, 2009
zomg, the details! So amazing.
Sei at 10:38PM, Feb. 15, 2009
This page is absolutely gorgeous.