Page 02
Arcturus on Aug. 5, 2007
This is the earliest page that I finished so it's less than spectacular. I'm not particularly happy with the way the panels are done over the next couple of pages, it was a bugger to work out how to represent the how the panels represented the events and passage of time over this sequence. I could have made it a bit better, but hey, you live and learn!
In case it isn't clear (it should be, but still) blonde guy's creating a force field of sorts to deflect/absorb the incoming shots from the watchtowers. The weapon the green lady's wielding is actually a staff. The beam it fires is power coming from her, which is focused by the staff. It just has a gun-style grip because she prefers it like that.
TheMidge28 at 3:22PM, Aug. 10, 2007
your doing great...keep it up...just thought to help.
Arcturus at 7:31AM, Aug. 10, 2007
Ah, apparently you can't edit your own posts, oops. Just ignore the one below, I misread you. Anyway, thanks for the comments. This is the first actual comic I've tried to do, so I'm still a bit shaky with sorting out the flow and layouts and stuff, you'll have to bare with me a bit. Glad you're enjoying it though
Arcturus at 7:19AM, Aug. 10, 2007
Just to clarify, I didn't say it was coming from her hair - its just coming from her, its psionic power, you know, magic, but thanks anyway :)
TheMidge28 at 11:28AM, Aug. 8, 2007
cool set up though! I love your explaination...it may have been good to slow the pacing to close in on these aspects reviewed in your notes...it wasn't clear she was deflecting the bullets and the power coming from green hair...the art and coloring is quite stunning and didn't cause my eyes to explode...I like this and want to see more.