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Arcturus on Aug. 19, 2007
OPEN SESAME! Some slightly better panel layouts and angles and stuff going on now. The top two panels are a bit awkward sitting next to eachother, but all-in-all I'm pretty happy with this page.
Thinking about it though, I doubt blonde fellow would realistically have to make that request, you'd think they'd have their plan sorted out beforehand. Oh well, never mind. Blonde fellow has this very formal manner of speaking - this is intentional, and not just down to me being horrible at writing dialogue. There's generally not a lot of speaking in this scene, though, but I think there's enough to get a basic handle on their personalities. More badly-written talky bits to look forward to later on, though! OH BOY
Holly at 9:13PM, Aug. 22, 2007
Oh, don't put yourself down. I'm intrigued. :)
Arcturus at 1:27PM, Aug. 20, 2007
Yeah I haven't really done anything with PR yet, so no-one really knows about the comic. I'd like to get more comments and things too, so I'll have to spread the word more or something. Again, thanks for all your comments and 5-ness so far :)
TheMidge28 at 10:56AM, Aug. 20, 2007
looking good...well done. I wish others could check this comic out...you are doing very well and love the mysterious story so far...I don't feel the dialogue is clunky or bad...