Episode 5 Page 3
Szyszka666 on June 22, 2014
Hello all, thank for sticking around for those 65 pages!
On this page You can see the interaction between Biatchess and Ashrat.
Pages with not much action (for ex. conversation like in this case) are always very tricky fore me. It's easy to just copy and paste the same faces and change only the content of the bubbles. But a good page should be more than that, right? So I hope You like the composition of this one :)
And who is the blonde head in Your opinion? ;)
Szyszka666 at 8:36AM, June 26, 2014
Luccia: Hmm, You're right - blond boy and blonde girl. But that's just my mistake (english is not my native language) :)
Asbin at 5:21AM, June 26, 2014
It would be pretty bad if it was just a repeat of the same images. I like the changing expressions. Makes it seem more real.
Luccia at 11:07AM, June 25, 2014
Blonde with an "e", so it's Silga.
Uhlan at 3:57PM, June 23, 2014
I was as well considering, that someone dyed their hair, but that would be too unfair to guess, I guess ;) I also have my reason to suspect that Zipp is innocent. As for daring you, I counted more for inducing you into publishing more often, than for revealing meanders of plot, which you of course cannot tell. Good luck and hope for more - soon :)
Szyszka666 at 12:57PM, June 23, 2014
Banes: Hahaha, nice one ;) Tashi's hair color is a bit unnatural, but she was never blonde as well :)
Banes at 12:30PM, June 23, 2014
Ah! So Tashi is a blonde, you say? This has got some intrigue to it! Nice layout in my opinion - it flows well!
Szyszka666 at 12:23PM, June 23, 2014
Uhlan: Two votes for each blonde head so far :) Zipp is the obvious choice at that stage as he is definitely hiding something. But I assure You, they all do ;) And the only spoiler You will get is that Asmael was never blonde :D
Uhlan at 11:06AM, June 23, 2014
Szyszka666: on page 4.11 you claimed, that Zipp has his motives that will be revealed soon. Besides I believe he looked through Asmael's intrigue. Unlike fallopiancrusader, I think he's not evil but only clumsy. Now I dare you - prove I'm wrong :)
Peipei at 10:37PM, June 22, 2014
This guy is totally her tool it seems. And it looks like the fate of our main cast lay upon her. :s
KimLuster at 4:13PM, June 22, 2014
Yeah I'm betting on Silga too! Their faces and expression do look really well!
Jamie59 at 3:34PM, June 22, 2014
It's Silga She's the most magical.
fallopiancrusader at 3:12PM, June 22, 2014
Yes, your page layout makes the conversation flow nicely. Also, good job conveying their emotions with their facial expressions. I bet Zipp is her friend, since he's doing such a good job of sabotaging his friends' quest.