More Trouble Brewing
Shadow_X on April 11, 2006
I like the style I drew this one in, I'm thinking about sticking with it. I thank the people who give me criticism and tell me what they don't like about the comic instead of just visiting, saying it's perfect and to keep going on. I want to get better, but raising myself esteem level with comments like “Wow this is good keep it up” and such aren't going to help me.
mixelkun at 7:47PM, April 12, 2006
i like this style a bit better, still, tis a quite good comic, the only uber critcal thing i chould say pratice on is the arms and hands, but then again
Xergrim at 11:59AM, April 12, 2006
Really, I think your main problems is your arms. They tend to be tiny or huge with no happy medium. Also, Roll's hair is a tad messy in the front. Plus, you COMPLETELY forgot about Beat's button design on his head after the first time you showed him. The itty bitty noses actually look good, I don't know if I commented on that or not before. I know it's just a small line that only takes like 2 seconds to add, but it looks better than not having a nose at all. I've got your critical comments covered. ^_^