since you asked for a crit... a few things:
1) too many words in a speech bubble sometimes.
2) pick a different font type... I know that some characters require a special sort of font other than arial or verdana... but just try to make it a readable font. Or break up speech text into paragraphs.
3) Good action poses.
4) Try separating layers on colors. The midtones and highlights and lineart on different layers.
5) Lineart could be set to the "multiply" mode.
Till next time...
kyupol at 11:22PM, July 10, 2007
since you asked for a crit... a few things: 1) too many words in a speech bubble sometimes. 2) pick a different font type... I know that some characters require a special sort of font other than arial or verdana... but just try to make it a readable font. Or break up speech text into paragraphs. 3) Good action poses. 4) Try separating layers on colors. The midtones and highlights and lineart on different layers. 5) Lineart could be set to the "multiply" mode. Till next time...
PowerMan X at 6:42PM, July 10, 2007
To quote Superious, "this just keeps getting better and better" !