Page 30-39 is the first flashback. Page 44-49 is the second and then we have the last one on page 54-end of chapter. I wanted the chapter to be a bit free flowing with the two stories intersecting one another. It seems it worked for some people and not for others. I'll get it down better next time I try it :D
Yes, she is. Tom and the bum she picked up are not the same person though. I have a slight problem making my characters look different from each other sometimes. Anyway, this is the second of three flashbacks in this chapter. I understand if it might get a bit confusing :)
Altara at 1:58PM, April 14, 2012
Page 30-39 is the first flashback. Page 44-49 is the second and then we have the last one on page 54-end of chapter. I wanted the chapter to be a bit free flowing with the two stories intersecting one another. It seems it worked for some people and not for others. I'll get it down better next time I try it :D
silverdragon1 at 7:13PM, April 13, 2012
oh this is a flashback? maybe you should have some sort of indication like a visual effect or just a box saying "earlier...".
Altara at 2:49AM, April 11, 2012
Yes, she is. Tom and the bum she picked up are not the same person though. I have a slight problem making my characters look different from each other sometimes. Anyway, this is the second of three flashbacks in this chapter. I understand if it might get a bit confusing :)
silverdragon1 at 6:48PM, April 10, 2012
I'm confused is she the same person doing the torturing?