#1: Wiping out at 5000 feet
Elitist Raven on March 19, 2006
This is my first sprite comic! If you see any mistakes let me know.
This is a cameo of SA2, so if you haven't played it, you aren't going to get most of the jokes.
Credit to everyone who ripped the sprites I used in this, I found them at http://sprites.fireball20xl.com
CJ01 at 5:37PM, May 23, 2006
lol I wonder if that could happen in the actual game lol
Xergrim at 10:39PM, April 17, 2006
Looked good, but since you haven't updated at all, this is off my favorites list. I hope you can update this summer or something, and if you do, then tell me and I'll check out the new stuff.
Director at 1:13PM, March 31, 2006
Yay sonis's an idiot.
Smaza2 at 1:21PM, March 25, 2006
Why havent you updated, PK?
Twin at 12:53PM, March 25, 2006
That always was odd...even Sonic couldn't drop from 30,000 feet on a board onto concrete AND SURVIVE. Chuck Norris maybe, but not Sonic.
Darkside at 6:47PM, March 22, 2006
What most other people who already told you the problems said. Oh and in panel 2. You forgot to take out that greenspot between sonics quills
Vaati at 6:03PM, March 22, 2006
I don't think that was worth a 3.
lefarce at 4:54PM, March 22, 2006
Him hanging on the side of the ship in pannel's 5 and 6 should really be redone. Your increasing the size of one sprite that is probably a smaller pixel size then sonic! This just makes it hard to tell whats going on. Look at the outline blocks for the helicopter, they're half the size of sonic's head. It seems so out of place when you are using such detailed sprites for backgrounds in the rest of the issue. Other then that, really good. Punch line was good, and the rest of the comic looks just perfect. Those two pannels kinda' bug me though. A 3 is you!
the2pacfan47 at 5:33PM, March 21, 2006
Lol! Thats the way it prob would happen for Sonic... and than hed splat to his death... which would suck but wed still laugh a little... and I dont know where Im going w/ this so Im gunna just shut up lol
deadfunny1 at 3:50PM, March 21, 2006
I dont really see any mistakes. pretty nice!
LordCommunistFox at 3:25PM, March 21, 2006
Nah you don't have to redo it. However if you need a "City escape" like background gp here:http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/SSA/Sheets/cityesc2.gif
HypnotikNinja2 at 6:38AM, March 21, 2006
Nice! Like Kagomas said add talking motions and it will make it look so much better! (Not that it isn't good already)
Kagomas at 6:26AM, March 21, 2006
I can't find any mistakes in this comic! Good positioning, decent sprites and a nice punchline! The only thing I would say is to try and add some talking motions to the characters face (It makes any comic look professional!)
masta flash at 6:23AM, March 21, 2006
rofl!
Mega Greg at 8:40PM, March 20, 2006
Very nice!
Elitist Raven at 8:36PM, March 20, 2006
Oops, forgot it was a Helicopter -.-; If you can help me find a more aircraft-ish background, I'll redo this! Thanks for reading and voting!
LordCommunistFox at 8:31PM, March 20, 2006
The aircraft Sonic was in was a heli, not a jet. The background does not look like a plain. It is a tunnel from a Batman game for the SNES. You get a 4 for not being realistic! But over all this is a good sprite comic. However you really OD'ed on the commas (,)!