the2pacfan47 at 3:28AM, Aug. 5, 2006

Well... to answer the first anonymus person... the reason for the background was initially symbolizing a storm comming in. This storm accually plays an important part to tha whole series... which will be seen later.

the2pacfan47 at 9:38AM, March 13, 2006

Im redoin the comic style so itll still be a while... I havent even started 11 yet

Smaza2 at 11:57PM, March 12, 2006

update goddamnit

Kagomas at 6:34AM, March 10, 2006

Um, wow!

the2pacfan47 at 6:51PM, March 7, 2006

Well... as said.. I am already changing everything. But I made this one before I came on here so I couldnt change my comic style until 11. And I do agree w/ all of you.

anonymous at 1:09PM, March 5, 2006

Very... well unclean. ( not,sanitary, basically) Try to improve your textboxes.

anonymous at 7:28AM, March 5, 2006

What the.... okay... Well, for one thing, Metal Sonic's dialogue is just about impossible to read. I missed it a few times since it blended into the background so much. Why did you pick such a cluttered background for this? I can barely see what's going on here. Right now things looked much better with the purple background in the first couple of panels.

Steve the Squirrel at 4:39AM, March 5, 2006

I think you might me forgetting the first rule of MSPaint: Know your limits. Trust me, I do Sonic And Stuff all in paint so I go out of my way to avoid flashy effect that would never look good enough for me to be satisfied with them. Special effects likes this always turn out messy with paint (particularly with that many panals zoomed out so far). I would sugest resizing your sprites and shortening each strip so not so much has to pile up at a time.

Christian at 3:19AM, March 5, 2006

http://www.fragile-minds.com/crashnbass/donts.htm

Smaza2 at 12:02AM, March 5, 2006

messy... but still great