I agree fully with Author AD, but if I may point out:
I've never once seen a "FSC" (as he calls them) that looks... Unique. They all look way too much like original sonic characters, so they're mainly tipped off to be Minor Edits more than anything else.
1) Characters knowing they're in a comic is rarely funny. Just because Bob and George pulled it off doesn't mean everyone can.
2) Backgrounds add to the atmosphere and the joke. Add them to each comic.
3) Don't have Official Sonic Characters (OSCs) be instantly attracted to Fan Sonic Characters (FSCs). This can ruin a comic, and make it sound like a bad fanfic.
4) Don't have the FSC just a plain recolour. Try making her look unique, such as my FSC, and not just a carbon copy of a OSC.
However, I can see room for improvement. Try and follow these and you'll improve drastically.
Good Luck.
june223 at 10:13PM, April 11, 2009
actually the girl IS sonic...
ReaperEX at 8:55PM, April 11, 2009
I agree fully with Author AD, but if I may point out: I've never once seen a "FSC" (as he calls them) that looks... Unique. They all look way too much like original sonic characters, so they're mainly tipped off to be Minor Edits more than anything else.
Author AD at 6:58PM, April 11, 2009
1) Characters knowing they're in a comic is rarely funny. Just because Bob and George pulled it off doesn't mean everyone can. 2) Backgrounds add to the atmosphere and the joke. Add them to each comic. 3) Don't have Official Sonic Characters (OSCs) be instantly attracted to Fan Sonic Characters (FSCs). This can ruin a comic, and make it sound like a bad fanfic. 4) Don't have the FSC just a plain recolour. Try making her look unique, such as my FSC, and not just a carbon copy of a OSC. However, I can see room for improvement. Try and follow these and you'll improve drastically. Good Luck.