ReaperEX at 1:06PM, March 21, 2009

Also, I'm going to watch this comic and help you out along the way.

ReaperEX at 1:05PM, March 21, 2009

Better, but: 1. When you're talking about yourself, capitalize "I". 2. Careful of those white lines below in Panel 1+2. 3. Authors? No. Don't use a self insertion sprite, and don't make him all powerful. Doing that will ruin this comic's potential success. You already knew this from the last comic, but don't forget to create custom characters. The more you have and the less sprites you have from the actual games, the better.