No offense but the comic sucks. You need
better word bubbles. If your going to be
making a sprite comic then use spites!
Not a toy trucks and cheaply drawn car.
The last comic needs way better laser beams
(If that was laser beams.) You need to get
some free time SEARCH on the internet get
some better sprites and special effects.
go here for sprites and special effects
and backgrounds kits(that means that you
make backgrounds with stuff): http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/Kajin/Sprite_section.htm
Oh yeah, your background sucks. Etheir make
your own like this: http://www.bobandgeorge.com/Other/Guides/Spritecomics.html
And please have some type panels so people know
what happens next! i'll give you a one.
Glad to help. ;)
Ok dude, first of all the plot doesnt really make any sense. They find eachother in 2 strips and just argue and crash, u need a little work on that. second, i dont really understand why homer and pacmans ship is a picture of a toy motorcycle, while you took the time to draw the girls ship. so for now im giving u a 1, but if this improvers, ill rate higher.
xHeh at 5:50PM, April 24, 2006
Man, why did you start this comic?
xHeh at 5:50PM, April 24, 2006
Man, why did you start this comic?
Metroid Escapes at 10:30AM, April 23, 2006
No offense but the comic sucks. You need better word bubbles. If your going to be making a sprite comic then use spites! Not a toy trucks and cheaply drawn car. The last comic needs way better laser beams (If that was laser beams.) You need to get some free time SEARCH on the internet get some better sprites and special effects. go here for sprites and special effects and backgrounds kits(that means that you make backgrounds with stuff): http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/Kajin/Sprite_section.htm Oh yeah, your background sucks. Etheir make your own like this: http://www.bobandgeorge.com/Other/Guides/Spritecomics.html And please have some type panels so people know what happens next! i'll give you a one. Glad to help. ;)
Rydel6 at 9:53AM, April 23, 2006
Wow...
Doklor567 at 9:37AM, April 23, 2006
Ok dude, first of all the plot doesnt really make any sense. They find eachother in 2 strips and just argue and crash, u need a little work on that. second, i dont really understand why homer and pacmans ship is a picture of a toy motorcycle, while you took the time to draw the girls ship. so for now im giving u a 1, but if this improvers, ill rate higher.