Memories
NeoKingpanda on Nov. 9, 2006
Ok,i am a begginer,for that i will check others tutorials,but i am not going to stop making comics,only stop i bit to search and read tutorials and learn a bit more.
P.S.:I know Tetsuo makes bad comments but i have to say,i like the sprite comic King of Sprites Tournament,that him makes.
SmartSpriter at 6:03PM, Nov. 10, 2006
The plural form of "army" is "armies"
luclucluc at 5:07PM, Nov. 10, 2006
it's kinda hard to see the sprites on that background... unless of course that's what you're trying to do (cause it would make sense if they are all snipers or something.)
NeoKingpanda at 3:53PM, Nov. 10, 2006
Where is the confusing part?This is the memories of the solders of the lost war part(This war is split into 3 parts:Lost War=Prologue, World Domination=middle comic, Tech Age=second(and final)part of the comic. And,yes is a bit confusing because of the the diferent armys(Neoland and X Fighers,Angel Knights is only a special troop of the Holy Command(Another army,that i plan to appear in Chapter 1)) Now,i explain all the armys,i think you get more confused! XD P.S.:What is the two or more armys reference,is armys?
SmartSpriter at 1:57PM, Nov. 10, 2006
Ok, I see a lot of things wrong, but since your a beginner, I'll be nice and go easy on ya. Alright? ^_^ For one thing, while your looking for tutorials, try to find some on text-boxes. It's a common thing 70% of all sprite-comic makers have problems with, and that's the text bubbles/boxes. Sooo....I'm sure, if you find some tutorials, you can get better. Also, I understand you are not a native-English-speaker. I understand. BUT, try to get used to the English language a bit more. I know its hard, I'm currently trying to learn both Italian and Japanese at once, so I'm used to the idea of learning another language. For the future, in English, after commas (,), question marks (?), exclamation points (!), and periods (.), you have to put a space. I acknowledge, and highly respect the fact that you said you like Tetsuo's comic. I also like and respect the fact you accepted you were a beginner, and are trying hard to get better. I like that. So, I'm not going to rate you at all, until you have some more pages. I'll come back to this comic in the future to see how it progresses. The story sounds pretty intersting, though it is a little confusing.