[quote]cmon, cut me some slack. as I said, it is my first sprite comic[/quote]
There is a difference between giving you slack, and giving you advice. We are giving you advice.
And I can't say anything MegaJosh hasn't said.
paneling needs work, every panel should not have white space around it.
take away the white space before you start making the objects. Also place the panels close together so the line that seperates them is a white line that was the background.
You need to work on your sizing. The gun looks weird too. And why is Mario still standing in the last panel if his god damned [i]head[/i] has been blown off?
Nikai Nockturne at 1:53PM, Jan. 2, 2007
lol...I always thought he would do that.
lefarce at 8:48PM, Dec. 28, 2006
Oh my.
nighthawk41 at 8:13PM, Dec. 28, 2006
And by the way, this joke has been done to death.
nighthawk41 at 8:13PM, Dec. 28, 2006
[quote]cmon, cut me some slack. as I said, it is my first sprite comic[/quote] There is a difference between giving you slack, and giving you advice. We are giving you advice. And I can't say anything MegaJosh hasn't said.
Nintendude at 7:40AM, Dec. 28, 2006
paneling needs work, every panel should not have white space around it. take away the white space before you start making the objects. Also place the panels close together so the line that seperates them is a white line that was the background.
blade22 at 9:17PM, Dec. 27, 2006
LOL EMO MARIO xD
MrNose at 8:15PM, Dec. 27, 2006
These are great!, *favorites*
MrNose at 8:14PM, Dec. 27, 2006
lol
opticghost25 at 7:48PM, Dec. 27, 2006
lol
dpw6 at 6:32PM, Dec. 27, 2006
cmon, cut me some slack. as I said, it is my first sprite comic
Mega Josh at 2:37PM, Dec. 27, 2006
You need to work on your sizing. The gun looks weird too. And why is Mario still standing in the last panel if his god damned [i]head[/i] has been blown off?
dreamwatcher at 2:35PM, Dec. 27, 2006
LOL, marios been drinking a little bit too much