Book One, page 79

bravo1102 on Oct. 4, 2017

It all comes back to Searsha. She's getting more and more into this whole lead character thing. And see how the interaction with Glorianna prompts Searsha to reflect on herself? I have been reading Banes' great newsposts. Too bad he stopped reading and commenting on the comic. Glorianna is intended to be a foil for Searsha. She's her opposite in appearance and background but similar in other ways so Searsha sees herself in her. I should point out that Searsha is very self-aware. She couldn't be a sorceress otherwise. Also as a sorceress, she is highly intelligent and sensitive. So she's quick on the uptake and no matter how much I owuld love to draw out her cluelessness as a protagonist, I can't and still have her be this sensitive, intelligent sorceress. I hate stories like that. Well this super-powered guy knows and can do all EXCEPT he's totally clueless about this OBVIOUS thing. To me it's as bad as the classic Idiot Plot The story will only work if all the characters behave like idiots.

Still in Europe but this page was posted before my departure. Today I should be meeting Tantz_Aerine in Athens! Wow, my first meeting with a fellow DDer. Some of you may know that I did do a few Duckcasts back in the day so I have talked to Ozoneocean, Banes, Tantz and Pit-Face. Jerrie Lee and Ayesinback both live in my home state (I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE bruhahaha!) But it takes a trip to Greece for me to finally meet someone. I hope.

Hopefully, I'll make it back so I can post more pages. Still about 20 pages or so in Book One and then four more books. So right now we're about 20% of the way into the story.