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arcade81 on Sept. 27, 2007
ART: Im very happy with the pose on this page, Although the sword looks very static, which made the highlighting of her dress very awkward. I wasn't gonna colour this page but im very pleased with the results i hope to improve my colouring and especialy my Inking (Which is poor to say the least)
STORY: Shes waiting for someone to arrive ?
Shao at 7:22AM, Sept. 29, 2007
you did a really good job with the pose. ANd the coloring is VERY unique.. so I'm sure you'll only get better and better. I like your use of backgrounds. they're well placed... and.. uhg that's all. i'm faving this!
salasvexx at 5:51AM, Sept. 29, 2007
Hey, I like what you had so far, where's the rest? I want more, anywyas, I agree with you about the sword but I think swords are staticy in general. Looking forward to seeing the rest. Salasvexx/DeadDoor
cameron11691 at 5:49PM, Sept. 28, 2007
Fantastic work there, man. the pose is well posed in the panel and not only that, the sword is well drawn too! im gonna fav this
x2_gon at 1:15PM, Sept. 28, 2007
Oh that's cool. Nice shading and shadows! fav'd!