Episode #1 the last straw....even though it was only twice
aj furfaro on Feb. 11, 2006
Ron winds up bored but after he becomes happy again, an old friend steps in
sorry about this one being so short…BTW that Kirby guy is a friend from MSN named KirbyKing
strongbad_999 at 2:06PM, Feb. 13, 2006
Good job for your first comic. Advice: I agree with Green Tangerine. You need to keep your drawings consistent throughout. It's like you took two separate comics about two seperate thigngs and slapped them together to make a bigger comic. Try to work out some pretty backrounds. Pure Green and Aqua barely get the point across as to what you're trying to acomplish (This is not a sprite comic, son!). Try adding some shrubbery for outdoorsyness. Finally, Spell check. The only thing that angers me more than another mega-man/sonic sprite clone (which you have avoided. Bravo!)is poor spelling/grammar. Be sure to spell check your bubbles for...stuff. I don't have it in my heart to give you a 3...but I don't think you earned a 5.
Green_Tangerine at 12:22PM, Feb. 13, 2006
The joke was pretty good, but it's a little too cut & paste for my tastes. Also, in the second half of the comic, there's less detail, making it look like a second, separate strip. I'd maybe have kept the highlights in their hair or something Other than that, it's good... Keep it up!
Tribute at 10:55AM, Feb. 13, 2006
5 for scarface reference
Jon Hanson at 1:23PM, Feb. 12, 2006
Made me chuckle!
Ron at 1:17PM, Feb. 12, 2006
This is a good fine thing. I like it! You get a⦠5⦠and a bar of gold.
AdHocFerox at 12:57PM, Feb. 12, 2006
Hah! 5'd for making me smile