The first page draft
aLeX O on May 22, 2006
ITS A DRAFT. so dont rate based off the art, I'm just asking for your opinions on the story…
for the panel where they have the big conversation, go in order of the little numbers on the edges of the
chat bubbles
by the way, noone is based off of anyone
incognito-mystery-person at 10:12PM, June 25, 2006
I like the start. The only problem I can find is what Stain pointed out- the text. Other than that, I'm quite intrigued thus far. Well done.
Stain at 8:09PM, May 26, 2006
It could use some work. The text needs to fit better with the page. It needs a little more explanation on what's going on, though. Overall it looks like it could get good. 4/5
aLeX O at 6:16PM, May 25, 2006
2 things. first, chainsaw, I'd win. I'd just bring my Katana in and slice you to pieces second: COMMENT PLEASE! IF YOU SEE MY COMIC, COMMENT FOR CHRIST SAKES!
chainsawhammer at 4:53PM, May 25, 2006
Come on, Alex, I dare you to fight me! If you can even figure out who I am...
aLeX O at 3:09PM, May 25, 2006
I finished Pencilling # 2, should be ready soon
aLeX O at 3:05PM, May 25, 2006
finished pencilling # 2, guest starring a certain other character
alexO2 at 11:51AM, May 25, 2006
I dont care, chainsaw. go f*** yourself, and stay away from my friends. if you want a fight you got one.
chainsawhammer at 6:59PM, May 24, 2006
You suck! This comic sucks! The story is stupid, and youre just a loser! NERD!
densad at 6:32PM, May 24, 2006
gutentag
anonymous at 3:41AM, May 24, 2006
Ok, it would be SO much easier to read if you put the speech bubbles in the right order. I'm not flaming. As is, it took me three tries before I got it all right.
aLeX O at 6:54PM, May 23, 2006
honestly guys, hit me with all you got, its the only way I can improve. I wont get mad at you unless you point is stupid.
Dark Apostle at 6:51PM, May 23, 2006
Great story!
aLeX O at 6:49PM, May 23, 2006
F1R$T p0$t! \/\/00t