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bravo1102 on March 29, 2015

Thank you KimLuster for nailing it.  The tone does vary as does the pacing. It's supposed to be zany meets serious. I was trying to make the characters different in tone and the universe consistent. And the universe is a weird nonsensical place.  I think it could be that I went in too many directions at once.

I have given thought to going with a quick action ending just winding everything up with a big fight.