Bad Dreams (Story Board)
IMoAoC on Aug. 10, 2010
This is the story board for the first page of my IMoAoC comic, page titled “Bad Dreams” :is quick flashback/dream of when this White Rook Lost her left arm…
Clearly this is no where near the finished product as She is not going to be bald, I just am stuck in a small rut right now and cant think of an appropriate hair stile for a female White Rook ^^;;
quick edit: note to self re-size image before posting
Akamar at 6:53AM, Aug. 13, 2010
I'm intrigued by what's going on. I know you asked for feedback in Sons of Plunder.. and I hope you'll forgive me being so bold.. but I thought I'd offer a layout suggestion that might portray what you're trying to say a little more clearly.. http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m206/Twilakam/Comic-layout-suggestion.jpg