Grim, this comic falls into every trap of bad sprite comic.
And recolors are never a good thing. I can recolor a sprite sheet in no time, it's not hard to do. Thats like DRAWING a comic where every character is the same guy, but slightly changing the color between them. Just because their sprites and their tiney doesn't make it acceptable. If I made a comic where everyone looked the same, but had diffent colored shirts and slightly changed names, I wouldn't expect to win any award for creativity. I'de expect to lose all respect I have as an artest.
Let me welcome you the world of Drunk Duck sprite comics. I see you've gotten some random "1" rating hate already. I hope they don't discourage you from continuing your comic.
Right now I suggest you work on capitalization and punctuation because it's unexcusable not to have. I know it sounds a bit harsh, but little things add up to making a great comic.
If you ever want any help, I'll be happy to. PM me in the forums with some contact info or a question or maybe even a request for backgrounds and I'll get right on it.
Hey, Jocelyn!! Yes, Teh Grim has come!
Personally, I like it! I don't really like sprites, but this is good! Can't believe you did this in paint!!...
Okay, you guys who just commented? I'm not trying to flame you are insult you or anything, but there are horrible horrible sprite comics out there. Compared to them, The Chronics of Sonic is awsome. And why leave a 1 without explaining?
Jos, some words of advice: yes, I like my grammer. Use it! The recolours are nice (I can't do one if my life depends on it), but try a little variation with your sprites would be nice. Also, I can't tell if there's a border or not. But I'll give you a five. I'm nice.
Ok.I'm not trying to be a nitpicker but a few grammar mistakes.But still it's got a good background.And I won't complain about the recolours because I use to use them.
dbzxmatt at 5:09AM, April 12, 2006
AHHHH!!! JPG=NO!!! But at least the text kept in the boxes... a little.
lefarce at 11:44PM, March 22, 2006
not to post again, but holy cow I screwed that last post up too... worse then the first even! Man, they need to make an edit button on these...
lefarce at 11:42PM, March 22, 2006
forigve my speeling.... 3 am and all thats keeping me up is a bowle of lucky charms and a soda...
lefarce at 11:41PM, March 22, 2006
Grim, this comic falls into every trap of bad sprite comic. And recolors are never a good thing. I can recolor a sprite sheet in no time, it's not hard to do. Thats like DRAWING a comic where every character is the same guy, but slightly changing the color between them. Just because their sprites and their tiney doesn't make it acceptable. If I made a comic where everyone looked the same, but had diffent colored shirts and slightly changed names, I wouldn't expect to win any award for creativity. I'de expect to lose all respect I have as an artest.
Xergrim at 9:51PM, March 15, 2006
Let me welcome you the world of Drunk Duck sprite comics. I see you've gotten some random "1" rating hate already. I hope they don't discourage you from continuing your comic. Right now I suggest you work on capitalization and punctuation because it's unexcusable not to have. I know it sounds a bit harsh, but little things add up to making a great comic. If you ever want any help, I'll be happy to. PM me in the forums with some contact info or a question or maybe even a request for backgrounds and I'll get right on it.
Johan at 11:37AM, March 15, 2006
Grim? I'll asume you're a friend of this guy? Don't. This comic is absolutely horrible. No excuses. I can't say I've seen much comics that were worse.
Grim Goblin at 9:01PM, March 12, 2006
Hey, Jocelyn!! Yes, Teh Grim has come! Personally, I like it! I don't really like sprites, but this is good! Can't believe you did this in paint!!... Okay, you guys who just commented? I'm not trying to flame you are insult you or anything, but there are horrible horrible sprite comics out there. Compared to them, The Chronics of Sonic is awsome. And why leave a 1 without explaining? Jos, some words of advice: yes, I like my grammer. Use it! The recolours are nice (I can't do one if my life depends on it), but try a little variation with your sprites would be nice. Also, I can't tell if there's a border or not. But I'll give you a five. I'm nice.
Midnight at 4:49PM, March 12, 2006
yea grammer needs work and try to stay away from recolors
Johan at 9:50AM, March 12, 2006
Horrible. 'nuff said.
Deek at 6:33AM, March 12, 2006
Deek Chainie likes the background.
The Commander at 6:15AM, March 12, 2006
Ok.I'm not trying to be a nitpicker but a few grammar mistakes.But still it's got a good background.And I won't complain about the recolours because I use to use them.